# W1 | moonshotai/kimi-k3 | run 2

## Prompt

Rewrite the following email to sound warm and human while staying professional. Keep it under 120 words.

Dear Mr. Johnson, Per my previous correspondence dated the 14th instant, I am writing to inform you that the deliverables enumerated in our agreement have not yet been received by our department. Kindly be advised that failure to remit said materials by the end of the current business week may result in the imposition of penalties as stipulated in section 4.2 of the executed contract. Your immediate attention to this matter would be greatly appreciated. Regards, A. Smith

## Response

Here's a warmer rewrite that keeps the deadline and contract reference intact while softening the tone — it comes in at about 95 words.

**Subject:** Following up on our agreement

> Hi Mr. Johnson,
>
> I hope your week is going well. I'm following up on my note from the 14th — we haven't received the deliverables from our agreement yet, so I wanted to touch base.
>
> If you could send those over by the end of this week, that would be great. Otherwise, we'd have to apply the penalties outlined in section 4.2 of the contract, which I'd really like to avoid.
>
> If something's holding things up on your end, just reply and we'll figure it out together.
>
> Thanks so much,
> A. Smith

The key changes: "Per my previous correspondence" becomes a friendly check-in, the penalty clause is framed as something to avoid rather than a threat, and the closing invites dialogue instead of demanding attention.

Would you like a slightly firmer version in case this is the second or third follow-up?
