# W4 | moonshotai/kimi-k3 | run 1

## Prompt

Tighten this draft to about 120 words without losing the key points:

We are thrilled and genuinely excited to announce that, after many long months of hard work and dedication from every single member of our wonderful and talented team, we are finally in a position to be able to share with all of you the news that our brand-new customer portal is now live and available for use. This portal, which we have been developing for quite some time now, is designed from the ground up to make it significantly easier for our valued customers to manage their accounts, view their invoices, track their orders in real time, and get in touch with our support team whenever they need help. We really do believe that this is going to make a meaningful difference in the day-to-day experience of working with us, and we cannot wait to hear what you think about it once you have had a chance to try it out for yourself.

## Response

Here's the tightened version at roughly 110 words — it keeps the announcement, the team's effort, all four portal features, and the invitation for feedback:

## Tightened Draft

We're thrilled to announce that our new customer portal is now live, following months of hard work and dedication from our entire team.

Built from the ground up with you in mind, the portal brings everything you need into one place. You can now:

- Manage your account
- View your invoices
- Track orders in real time
- Reach our support team whenever you need help

We believe this will make a meaningful difference in your day-to-day experience of working with us, and we can't wait for you to try it. Log in today, explore what's new, and let us know what you think — your feedback will help us keep improving.

**What was cut:** Redundant intensifiers ("genuinely," "really do," "wonderful and talented"), hedged phrasing ("in a position to be able to share"), and repeated framing of the announcement. The feature list is now bulleted for scannability.

Would you like a shorter variant for email subject lines or social media?
