# W4 | meta/muse-spark-1.1 | run 2

## Prompt

Tighten this draft to about 120 words without losing the key points:

We are thrilled and genuinely excited to announce that, after many long months of hard work and dedication from every single member of our wonderful and talented team, we are finally in a position to be able to share with all of you the news that our brand-new customer portal is now live and available for use. This portal, which we have been developing for quite some time now, is designed from the ground up to make it significantly easier for our valued customers to manage their accounts, view their invoices, track their orders in real time, and get in touch with our support team whenever they need help. We really do believe that this is going to make a meaningful difference in the day-to-day experience of working with us, and we cannot wait to hear what you think about it once you have had a chance to try it out for yourself.

## Response

Here's a tightened version at ~115 words:

> After many months of hard work from our entire team, we’re thrilled to announce our brand-new customer portal is now live.

> We designed the portal from the ground up to make it easier to work with us. In one place, you can manage your account, view invoices, track orders in real time, and reach our support team whenever you need help.

> We believe this will make a meaningful difference in your day-to-day experience.

> We’d love for you to log in, explore the new features, and let us know what you think. Your feedback will help us continue to improve.

> Thank you for being a valued customer and for your patience while we built this.
